I just discovered your game. It's really good! I am officially invested in the story, and I am all about the drama with Kosta. It's the perfect amount of angsty/sweet. And I am intrigued by Abel. Thank you for your hard work, and I can't wait to see where it goes from here.
Hi! Your game is super cool! I'm a bit confused. It is written that the game was updated to chapter 8. But when I replayed it, it ended at the same place as a week ago. It ended in chapter 7 when someone knocked on the door. I received a notification about update, that's why I'm confused.
Why are some of the choices blocked such as the more emotional ones aka crying or trying to say your fine in chapter 1 and 2? Are they not implemented yet or do you need specific things to unlock them?
Tfw you accidentally catch an update just when you just wanted to find and replay that WIP you played sometime ago...😳
Anyway. One word: KOSTAAAAAAA🥰
That's it. That's my review for this update lol. Just. Kosta.
Okay. Bugs/errors time.
1. The DOOR effect in Chapter VI doesn't seem to work on desktop, but works fine on mobile? It only worked ONCE on my laptop, and then it just froze on the word no matter what I did, so I switched playing on my phone.
2. Some kind of menu shows up when you choose "I made a mistake" when you apologize to Kosta.
3. I don't think that header is supposed to be there, lol
Hello ! I just wanna say that this is absolutely AMAZING. But there something bothering me because I been waiting this for more than 20 sec. I hope this can be fix soon. Thank for the nice story =D
Thank you so much! I think it should work now, but you'll have to start from the begining cuz I changed some stuff in the first chapters and it affects the rest
hey! No, it shouldn't end there. Try waiting for a few seconds on that screen cuz there the lines of text should appear with a 2 sec pause between them. If that doesn't help tell me so I can look into it XD
hey! so im having the same issue but the game quite literally doesnt wanna continue ive tried closing and reopeningg the game and still nothing i even waited a couple minutes
Oh, that's not good. Ok, I'll see if I can figure this, worst case scenario I'll take out the time effect. I'll be back in a couple of days, after I do that. Thanks for telling me!
Hello!! I just want to say I am IN LOVE with this so far. Your writing is incredible and I love all the choices and the way you really get to build the mc!! I'm taking -male- Kosta route cuz I love me some of that sweet sweet "bad boy who is actually good and says things he doesn't mean because MY EMOTIONS" type romantic angst.
I personally felt the kiss at the end of the most recent update was very sudden and out of no where (But that's just me personally your story is still amazing <3). I do be tryna have them grow closer at a slower pace, so I chose the non romantic option when Kosta is at MCs door. Just a question, if I don't choose that romantic option that leads to the kiss, will MC have other opportunities to become romantically involved with Kosta?
The way the last update ended will be changed a little in the next update. I suspected the kiss would not fit with some mcs' personality (just as you felt it) so I plan to offer more options there.
Yeah, you'll get the chance to develop your mc's relationship with all the ros even if you're not choosing them from the start. However, once you choose one your mc will be locked on that route. Not sure if it will stay like this or not, but for now it's like that, because I'm trying to sort out some technicalities.
Hiiiii!! I only want to say that I LOVE this story, and I must say I maybe or maybe not cry a little, the way MC struggle with all it is happening... I don't know, but make me a little emotional :D
Oh, i have a question tho, it is this part the last update? Because after that, my page went blank, without a word, there isn't even a "End chapter" to something like that, so, I found it a bit strange:
"...you're one of the toughest persons I know..." August's words suddenly pop in your head and you snort bitterly. "If only. If only that were...true." Something trickles down your left cheek and you close your eyes, wishing the sun would come out sooner."
Nah, thank you for your hard work! Idk if this will help you in a way, but I make a screenshot so you can see what im talking about (it is before that ""...you're one of the toughest persons I know..." August's words suddenly pop in your head and you snort bitterly. "If only. If only that were...true." Something trickles down your left cheek and you close your eyes, wishing the sun would come out sooner."):
Yeah, but I still can't figure it out. On that page there's a timer so the first word comes after 1 second. If you stay on that page there's nothing popping on it?
Heyo! This game is incredible, and I can't wait for more but I think I found a bug/glitch? It might be nothing but I noticed that August's route is shorter than Kosta's route? Like you cant proceed after "Leon's doing the driving usually." in August's route but you can in Kosta's route. Anyways fantastic game, great storyline, amazing characters. Keep up the good work!
Is there any way to save to the disk? I play it online and every time i turn it off i have to restart all again.
By the way, this game is truly amazing ya know. I love everything about it and I’m willing to replay it as many times as I can. The writing is very engaging, and the characters are so loving and supportive it’s so easy to fall in love with all of them.
Thanks a lot for this amazing game, I would be so happy to see the next update. UvU
Hmmm....I'll look into it. But if you play from the same device, you should be able to load the files, even if you play online (from the personal file page). Even so, I'll try to fix it for the next update😁
The roleplaying choices offered are great. That's always been the most important quality in an RPG like this, and I'm mostly satisified with how they allow me to play the character I want. I am a little unsure about the distinction between the "intuition" and "logical" choices that popped up only once though. Is it something you're considering adding that's going to force me to choose a path in the future? Sometimes people can be both good at reading microexpressions and understanding emotions as they are at reasoning and analyzing something logically. :)
The romance options are also quite decent, though I really do wish I could choose August's gender, since it's masculine qualities that really attracts me in a romantic partner. That will be especially imperative later on during the sex part of the romance. Kosta's nice too, but he's too much of a hothead. So far, the way August can be both soft and supportive to the PC, as well as being a strong, coolheaded and dependable leader really checked all the right boxes for me, and the strong rapport and unspoken understanding that the two of them shares on top of everything... August would be the perfect choice for me, if he was a "he".
Anyway, all this feedback is to let you know, your game is greatly appreciated. Please update. Really looking forward to finishing it some time.
Hey! Thanks a lot for playing and for giving me feedback, it's really useful😁
The logic/intuition thing is introduced for two reasons (mainly). 1. To add layers to the way the mc experiences the world and to make it more particular. 2. To give variety, meaning that there will be times when an intuitive mc will be more affected by events or, on the contrary, when they will be better prepared for some things. I will not make an intuitive mc unable to use logic or vice versa, I completely agree that humans are not built like that. But individuals tend to trust and lean more on one side when they're under pressure and this is what I'm trying to get. And I don't want to overpower the mc.
As for August, this is just who they are, they were created from the start like that and I won't change it because the whole character would change.
Thank you again for taking the time to send this. I'll update soon🧡
i recently remember this and ive decided to finish it and i am in love with kosta. idk if there are any romance options on him though or maybe i just missed them.
the mc's ability kinda reminds me a bit like telepathy in a way. i happened to end up not soliciting any romance points for anyone since i was trying to meet everyone before i shoot my shot and while august is a darling, there is something about a grumpy (secretly big softie) former partner that makes my heart skip a beat.
I totally agree with you about Kosta!:)) (and no, there isn't yet the option to enter a romance with them, it will be available in the next update, so don't worry). Yeah, the Mc's ability is sth of the sort, my plan is to let you discover it slowly xD. Thanks for writing and I hope you have lots of fun playing❤
WOOOW, I'm in love with this story, it is so well written and absorbing, well done! I have a couple of questions tho, first of all, you have like an schedule or you update when you feel it?? (just curiosity xD) and second (mini spoilers ahead)
The second multiple options of chapter V, I only can choose the first option: "... my former partner" but no the other two, it is because theese options are blocked? Or is a bug?
Again, thank you for all your hard work! This story is amazing
There is not need to apologies! I mean, you are working so hard for us, and about the job, at the end it is the important thing, although I will look forward to the next chapter!! see yaa <3
Thanks so much! And you're definitely not dumb, lmao. You can see how many days have passed since the last update by clicking the more info link above the comment section (hope that's what you were asking about:)) ). And a new update is coming soon, in a week or so:).
Found this and I have to say I am loving the characters so far! definitely can’t wait to see what we can say to each other next and love that you noted the ❤️ on the romance option I appreciate not missing stuff like that. I look forward to more character interactions in the next update :)
You had me at the Leonard Cohen intro! I lost a bit of the steampunk atmosphere (assuming that was the intent) midway through, but it is gorgeously done in the beginning and I hope it'll resurface throughout. Love the trans character, and love being able to be canonically trans too. I hope you keep on updating this. What I ASSUME might become a romance option gave me a goosebumps a couple of times which is no easy feat.
I'm so excited you liked it! Yeah, the atmosphere I'm going for is somewhere around there, but I want it to be more subtle and more grey (if that makes sense). Thanks for telling me it gets lost on the way, I'll return to it to see what I can do.
Also, if you're talking about August, yes, they're a romantic option😊
I think I get what you mean by more subtle and grey, I can absolutely see how you can develop the aesthetic without it being as in your face as most cyberpunk. IDK if this makes sense but when you say that I am thinking of the flooding scene in Bong Joon-ho's Parasite?
Also thanks for taking the feedback so gracefully, I really hope it comes across that I mean it admiringly and encouragingly.
I am, shamefully, actually referring to the MC's old partner (I forgot their name but the very grumpy and kinda mean one [we all have a type IG!]). August is a darling though!
Oh, yes, the old partner is also a romantic option😊
Actually yes, that's exactly the feeling, like in Parasite! And I should be the one thanking you for taking the time to give me feedback, which was really helpful btw😁
It was great!I really enjoyed the story so far but just one thing please add some save and settings so we can adjust it to our devices in my phone the font size was so little in the middle on the whole big blue background it really gets hard to read sometimes I know it's a wip but I see great potential here please continue with the good work 🙂(sorry if my english isn't good it's not my first language)
Thanks a lot! Yeah, I'll introduce the save option in a few days, as for the settings to adjust the writing to the screen, I'll try to find out how to do that 😅
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I just discovered your game. It's really good! I am officially invested in the story, and I am all about the drama with Kosta. It's the perfect amount of angsty/sweet. And I am intrigued by Abel. Thank you for your hard work, and I can't wait to see where it goes from here.
thank you so much!
Hi! Your game is super cool! I'm a bit confused. It is written that the game was updated to chapter 8. But when I replayed it, it ended at the same place as a week ago. It ended in chapter 7 when someone knocked on the door. I received a notification about update, that's why I'm confused.
Hey, srry, I should've mentioned sth about that xD Yeah, i made the devlog late, it's the update you already know about.
Why are some of the choices blocked such as the more emotional ones aka crying or trying to say your fine in chapter 1 and 2? Are they not implemented yet or do you need specific things to unlock them?
For now they're not finished😁
Tfw you accidentally catch an update just when you just wanted to find and replay that WIP you played sometime ago...😳
Anyway. One word: KOSTAAAAAAA🥰
That's it. That's my review for this update lol. Just. Kosta.
Okay. Bugs/errors time.
1. The DOOR effect in Chapter VI doesn't seem to work on desktop, but works fine on mobile? It only worked ONCE on my laptop, and then it just froze on the word no matter what I did, so I switched playing on my phone.
2. Some kind of menu shows up when you choose "I made a mistake" when you apologize to Kosta.
3. I don't think that header is supposed to be there, lol
you are a life saver, thank you! They should all work now (fingers crossed)
This game is going to end up killing me because of cliffhangers
😂🤗 thanks for playing!
AAAaAaaaaaaaaAAAAAAAAAA KOSTA'S KISS SCENE
I...... im squeaking with joy. it was too wholesome. send help.
Oh nvm, just reload it :p
Great!
This was such a good story omw. I am really looking forward to seeing the update. This was wonderful.
KOSTA IS SO AWOOGA AND THE KISS IS SO AWOOGA AND HES SO AHHHHH
Also if anybody hurts May or Lucas, I will riot
oof that was gritty I loved it and August <3 oh they are lovely
Hello! Um, I got a problem I was hoping you could help out. In chapter VI the story freezes and it just says 'Door'. What do I do? Love your game btw
Thank you so much! I think it should work now, but you'll have to start from the begining cuz I changed some stuff in the first chapters and it affects the rest
I had the same problem today, but realoading the page (on laptop) solved the issue.
I can't wait for the update;_;
omg this is so good, this game makes it so HARD TO CHOOSE who to romance 😭
I wish more people would see this game, I chose Kosta but I’m going to totally redo a playthrough with August too. I’m so excited for more updates!
I really love your characters and how you write your story<3
loving the game!!!!!!! keep up the good work :DDDDD
Hello! Does the story end at chap VI or is there anything more? the game gets a blank screen for me with 'door' being the only thing written.
hey! No, it shouldn't end there. Try waiting for a few seconds on that screen cuz there the lines of text should appear with a 2 sec pause between them. If that doesn't help tell me so I can look into it XD
It worked thank you! Seems I was too impatient lol. Love your story!!
hey! so im having the same issue but the game quite literally doesnt wanna continue ive tried closing and reopeningg the game and still nothing i even waited a couple minutes
Oh, that's not good. Ok, I'll see if I can figure this, worst case scenario I'll take out the time effect. I'll be back in a couple of days, after I do that. Thanks for telling me!
Hello, I am absolutely taken with the content so far. Thank you, looking forward to checking out more eventually. <3
🧡🧡🤗
Is it playable on phone? can't get past the first page aha
yeah it should be. It just gives you a blank page or...?
The ending made me tear up fr
This is simply AMAZING! I was HOOKED from the first second. Seriously, you did great! Looking forward to seeing more!
Thank you so much, I'm so happy you enjoyed it!
Hello!! I just want to say I am IN LOVE with this so far. Your writing is incredible and I love all the choices and the way you really get to build the mc!! I'm taking -male- Kosta route cuz I love me some of that sweet sweet "bad boy who is actually good and says things he doesn't mean because MY EMOTIONS" type romantic angst.
I personally felt the kiss at the end of the most recent update was very sudden and out of no where (But that's just me personally your story is still amazing <3). I do be tryna have them grow closer at a slower pace, so I chose the non romantic option when Kosta is at MCs door. Just a question, if I don't choose that romantic option that leads to the kiss, will MC have other opportunities to become romantically involved with Kosta?
Heey!! I'm so happy to read this, thank you!
The way the last update ended will be changed a little in the next update. I suspected the kiss would not fit with some mcs' personality (just as you felt it) so I plan to offer more options there.
Yeah, you'll get the chance to develop your mc's relationship with all the ros even if you're not choosing them from the start. However, once you choose one your mc will be locked on that route. Not sure if it will stay like this or not, but for now it's like that, because I'm trying to sort out some technicalities.
Hiiiii!! I only want to say that I LOVE this story, and I must say I maybe or maybe not cry a little, the way MC struggle with all it is happening... I don't know, but make me a little emotional :D
Oh, i have a question tho, it is this part the last update? Because after that, my page went blank, without a word, there isn't even a "End chapter" to something like that, so, I found it a bit strange:
"...you're one of the toughest persons I know..."
August's words suddenly pop in your head and you snort bitterly.
"If only. If only that were...true."
Something trickles down your left cheek and you close your eyes, wishing the sun would come out sooner."
Have a great day!
Heeey!! You're so sweet, you're making me emotional as well:)
That scene should not be the end of the update, you're right. Something is wrong there, I'll look into it. Thanks for telling me 🧡
Nah, thank you for your hard work! Idk if this will help you in a way, but I make a screenshot so you can see what im talking about (it is before that ""...you're one of the toughest persons I know..."
August's words suddenly pop in your head and you snort bitterly.
"If only. If only that were...true."
Something trickles down your left cheek and you close your eyes, wishing the sun would come out sooner."):
Have you looked into it yet? Because it's still ending on a blank page....
Yeah, but I still can't figure it out. On that page there's a timer so the first word comes after 1 second. If you stay on that page there's nothing popping on it?
It worked... guess I just needed to be patient sorry...
No prob, I'm glad it's not sth else:)
Heyo! This game is incredible, and I can't wait for more but I think I found a bug/glitch? It might be nothing but I noticed that August's route is shorter than Kosta's route? Like you cant proceed after "Leon's doing the driving usually." in August's route but you can in Kosta's route. Anyways fantastic game, great storyline, amazing characters. Keep up the good work!
yep, that's a bug, thanks a lot for telling me!
Also, I'm so excited you like it, it means a lot🧡🧡
Is there any way to save to the disk? I play it online and every time i turn it off i have to restart all again.
By the way, this game is truly amazing ya know. I love everything about it and I’m willing to replay it as many times as I can. The writing is very engaging, and the characters are so loving and supportive it’s so easy to fall in love with all of them.
Thanks a lot for this amazing game, I would be so happy to see the next update. UvU
Hmmm....I'll look into it. But if you play from the same device, you should be able to load the files, even if you play online (from the personal file page). Even so, I'll try to fix it for the next update😁
Thank you sososos much, I'm happy you like it!
Ohh I don’t like it at all, I absolutely loooove it!!! I’m melting with all the softies yes yes <3
The roleplaying choices offered are great. That's always been the most important quality in an RPG like this, and I'm mostly satisified with how they allow me to play the character I want. I am a little unsure about the distinction between the "intuition" and "logical" choices that popped up only once though. Is it something you're considering adding that's going to force me to choose a path in the future? Sometimes people can be both good at reading microexpressions and understanding emotions as they are at reasoning and analyzing something logically. :)
The romance options are also quite decent, though I really do wish I could choose August's gender, since it's masculine qualities that really attracts me in a romantic partner. That will be especially imperative later on during the sex part of the romance. Kosta's nice too, but he's too much of a hothead. So far, the way August can be both soft and supportive to the PC, as well as being a strong, coolheaded and dependable leader really checked all the right boxes for me, and the strong rapport and unspoken understanding that the two of them shares on top of everything... August would be the perfect choice for me, if he was a "he".
Anyway, all this feedback is to let you know, your game is greatly appreciated. Please update. Really looking forward to finishing it some time.
Hey! Thanks a lot for playing and for giving me feedback, it's really useful😁
The logic/intuition thing is introduced for two reasons (mainly). 1. To add layers to the way the mc experiences the world and to make it more particular. 2. To give variety, meaning that there will be times when an intuitive mc will be more affected by events or, on the contrary, when they will be better prepared for some things. I will not make an intuitive mc unable to use logic or vice versa, I completely agree that humans are not built like that. But individuals tend to trust and lean more on one side when they're under pressure and this is what I'm trying to get. And I don't want to overpower the mc.
As for August, this is just who they are, they were created from the start like that and I won't change it because the whole character would change.
Thank you again for taking the time to send this. I'll update soon🧡
this so gooodd!! I really can't wait for the next update<33 And Kosta is so... Idk love Kosta already<33 Keep it up!!!
This makes me so happy! Thanks for dropping by and playing! I'm working on the update now and I can't wait to hear what you think about it<D<3
i recently remember this and ive decided to finish it and i am in love with kosta. idk if there are any romance options on him though or maybe i just missed them.
the mc's ability kinda reminds me a bit like telepathy in a way. i happened to end up not soliciting any romance points for anyone since i was trying to meet everyone before i shoot my shot and while august is a darling, there is something about a grumpy (secretly big softie) former partner that makes my heart skip a beat.
cant wait for the more!
I totally agree with you about Kosta!:)) (and no, there isn't yet the option to enter a romance with them, it will be available in the next update, so don't worry). Yeah, the Mc's ability is sth of the sort, my plan is to let you discover it slowly xD. Thanks for writing and I hope you have lots of fun playing❤
WOOOW, I'm in love with this story, it is so well written and absorbing, well done! I have a couple of questions tho, first of all, you have like an schedule or you update when you feel it?? (just curiosity xD) and second (mini spoilers ahead)
The second multiple options of chapter V, I only can choose the first option: "... my former partner" but no the other two, it is because theese options are blocked? Or is a bug?
Again, thank you for all your hard work! This story is amazing
Have a great day~
Hello! Thank you sososo much for playing and for your nice words🧡🧡
Currently I don't gave a schedule because my job's getting in the way xD. At some point this year I might develop one, but who knows.
The "partner" options shouldn't be blocked, it's a bug and I'll solve it as soon as I can (srry for that).
There is not need to apologies! I mean, you are working so hard for us, and about the job, at the end it is the important thing, although I will look forward to the next chapter!! see yaa <3
I can't restart the game
Hey! I'm not sure what's the problem😕...does it say sth or...
Encountered a problem <.<;; Aside from that, this is amazing! Thank you for making this! ^_^
Thanks a lot for the heads up! I'll take care of it😁
And thank you for the support, it means so much🧡
Is there a save option?
Yes, at the final of each chapter you can click on the save option and you'll find the file to load in the personal file page.
Dang, that was way too short for my liking xD
I love this game so much, can't wait for more!
thank you so much, I'm so happy to hear that🧡🧡
And don't worry there's more to come!
Thanks so much! And you're definitely not dumb, lmao. You can see how many days have passed since the last update by clicking the more info link above the comment section (hope that's what you were asking about:)) ). And a new update is coming soon, in a week or so:).
Found this and I have to say I am loving the characters so far! definitely can’t wait to see what we can say to each other next and love that you noted the ❤️ on the romance option I appreciate not missing stuff like that. I look forward to more character interactions in the next update :)
Thank you! I'm excited to share more of this with you😁
You had me at the Leonard Cohen intro! I lost a bit of the steampunk atmosphere (assuming that was the intent) midway through, but it is gorgeously done in the beginning and I hope it'll resurface throughout. Love the trans character, and love being able to be canonically trans too. I hope you keep on updating this. What I ASSUME might become a romance option gave me a goosebumps a couple of times which is no easy feat.
I'm so excited you liked it! Yeah, the atmosphere I'm going for is somewhere around there, but I want it to be more subtle and more grey (if that makes sense). Thanks for telling me it gets lost on the way, I'll return to it to see what I can do.
Also, if you're talking about August, yes, they're a romantic option😊
I think I get what you mean by more subtle and grey, I can absolutely see how you can develop the aesthetic without it being as in your face as most cyberpunk. IDK if this makes sense but when you say that I am thinking of the flooding scene in Bong Joon-ho's Parasite?
Also thanks for taking the feedback so gracefully, I really hope it comes across that I mean it admiringly and encouragingly.
I am, shamefully, actually referring to the MC's old partner (I forgot their name but the very grumpy and kinda mean one [we all have a type IG!]). August is a darling though!
Oh, yes, the old partner is also a romantic option😊
Actually yes, that's exactly the feeling, like in Parasite! And I should be the one thanking you for taking the time to give me feedback, which was really helpful btw😁
It was great!I really enjoyed the story so far but just one thing please add some save and settings so we can adjust it to our devices in my phone the font size was so little in the middle on the whole big blue background it really gets hard to read sometimes I know it's a wip but I see great potential here please continue with the good work 🙂(sorry if my english isn't good it's not my first language)
Thanks a lot! Yeah, I'll introduce the save option in a few days, as for the settings to adjust the writing to the screen, I'll try to find out how to do that 😅
Kinda interesting. I'll wait for the update!
Thank you!